Documentation: git.html/git.7

Finish each sentence with a full stop.

Instead of saying 'directory index' 'directory cache' etc,
consistently say 'index'.

Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <junkio@cox.net>

1 files changed, 94 insertions, 80 deletions

diff --git a/Documentation/git.txt b/Documentation/git.txt
index a51824986..fc11516de 100644
--- a/Documentation/git.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git.txt
@@ -38,10 +38,13 @@ CORE GIT COMMANDS
 Before reading this cover to cover, you may want to take a look
 at the link:tutorial.html[tutorial] document.
 
-The <<Discussion>> section below contains much useful definition and
-clarification info - read that first.  And of the commands, I suggest
-reading gitlink:git-update-index[1] and
-gitlink:git-read-tree[1] first - I wish I had!
+The <<Discussion>> section below contains much useful definition
+and clarification info - read that first.  After that, if you
+are interested in using git to manage (version control)
+projects, read on commands listed in Porcelain-ish commands
+section next.  On the other hand, if you are writing your own
+Porcelain, I suggest reading gitlink:git-update-index[1] and
+gitlink:git-read-tree[1] first.
 
 If you are migrating from CVS, link:cvs-migration.html[cvs migration]
 document may be helpful after you finish the tutorial.
@@ -54,13 +57,13 @@ link:howto-index.html[howto] documents.
 David Greaves <david@dgreaves.com>
 08/05/05
 
-Updated by Junio C Hamano <junkio@cox.net> on 2005-05-05 to
-reflect recent changes.
+Updated by Junio C Hamano <junkio@cox.net> on 2005-05-05 and
+further on 2005-12-07 to reflect recent changes.
 
 Commands Overview
 -----------------
 The git commands can helpfully be split into those that manipulate
-the repository, the index and the working fileset, those that
+the repository, the index and the files in the working tree, those that
 interrogate and compare them, and those that moves objects and
 references between repositories.
 
@@ -79,25 +82,26 @@ gitlink:git-apply[1]::
 	applies it to the working tree.
 
 gitlink:git-checkout-index[1]::
-	Copy files from the index to the working directory
+	Copy files from the index to the working tree.
 
 gitlink:git-commit-tree[1]::
-	Creates a new commit object
+	Creates a new commit object.
 
 gitlink:git-hash-object[1]::
 	Computes the object ID from a file.
 
 gitlink:git-index-pack[1]::
-	Build pack index file for an existing packed archive.
+	Build pack idx file for an existing packed archive.
 
 gitlink:git-init-db[1]::
-	Creates an empty git object database
+	Creates an empty git object database, or reinitialize an
+	existing one.
 
 gitlink:git-merge-index[1]::
-	Runs a merge for files needing merging
+	Runs a merge for files needing merging.
 
 gitlink:git-mktag[1]::
-	Creates a tag object
+	Creates a tag object.
 
 gitlink:git-pack-objects[1]::
 	Creates a packed archive of objects.
@@ -106,7 +110,7 @@ gitlink:git-prune-packed[1]::
 	Remove extra objects that are already in pack files.
 
 gitlink:git-read-tree[1]::
-	Reads tree information into the directory index
+	Reads tree information into the index.
 
 gitlink:git-repo-config[1]::
 	Get and set options in .git/config.
@@ -115,65 +119,65 @@ gitlink:git-unpack-objects[1]::
 	Unpacks objects out of a packed archive.
 
 gitlink:git-update-index[1]::
-	Modifies the index or directory cache
+	Registers files in the working tree to the index.
 
 gitlink:git-write-tree[1]::
-	Creates a tree from the current index
+	Creates a tree from the index.
 
 
 Interrogation commands
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 gitlink:git-cat-file[1]::
-	Provide content or type information for repository objects
+	Provide content or type/size information for repository objects.
 
 gitlink:git-diff-index[1]::
-	Compares content and mode of blobs between the index and repository
+	Compares content and mode of blobs between the index and repository.
 
 gitlink:git-diff-files[1]::
-	Compares files in the working tree and the index
+	Compares files in the working tree and the index.
 
 gitlink:git-diff-stages[1]::
-	Compares two "merge stages" in the index file.
+	Compares two "merge stages" in the index.
 
 gitlink:git-diff-tree[1]::
-	Compares the content and mode of blobs found via two tree objects
+	Compares the content and mode of blobs found via two tree objects.
 
 gitlink:git-fsck-objects[1]::
-	Verifies the connectivity and validity of the objects in the database
+	Verifies the connectivity and validity of the objects in the database.
 
 gitlink:git-ls-files[1]::
-	Information about files in the index/working directory
+	Information about files in the index and the working tree.
 
 gitlink:git-ls-tree[1]::
-	Displays a tree object in human readable form
+	Displays a tree object in human readable form.
 
 gitlink:git-merge-base[1]::
-	Finds as good a common ancestor as possible for a merge
+	Finds as good common ancestors as possible for a merge.
 
 gitlink:git-name-rev[1]::
-	Find symbolic names for given revs
+	Find symbolic names for given revs.
 
 gitlink:git-rev-list[1]::
-	Lists commit objects in reverse chronological order
+	Lists commit objects in reverse chronological order.
 
 gitlink:git-show-index[1]::
 	Displays contents of a pack idx file.
 
 gitlink:git-tar-tree[1]::
-	Creates a tar archive of the files in the named tree
+	Creates a tar archive of the files in the named tree object.
 
 gitlink:git-unpack-file[1]::
-	Creates a temporary file with a blob's contents
+	Creates a temporary file with a blob's contents.
 
 gitlink:git-var[1]::
-	Displays a git logical variable
+	Displays a git logical variable.
 
 gitlink:git-verify-pack[1]::
-	Validates packed git archive files
+	Validates packed git archive files.
 
-The interrogate commands may create files - and you can force them to
-touch the working file set - but in general they don't
+In general, the interrogate commands do not touch the files in
+the working tree.
 
 
 Synching repositories
@@ -181,19 +185,24 @@ Synching repositories
 
 gitlink:git-clone-pack[1]::
 	Clones a repository into the current repository (engine
-	for ssh and local transport)
+	for ssh and local transport).
 
 gitlink:git-fetch-pack[1]::
-	Updates from a remote repository.
+	Updates from a remote repository (engine for ssh and
+	local transport).
 
 gitlink:git-http-fetch[1]::
-	Downloads a remote git repository via HTTP
+	Downloads a remote git repository via HTTP by walking
+	commit chain.
 
 gitlink:git-local-fetch[1]::
-	Duplicates another git repository on a local system
+	Duplicates another git repository on a local system by
+	walking commit chain.
 
 gitlink:git-peek-remote[1]::
-	Lists references on a remote repository using upload-pack protocol.
+	Lists references on a remote repository using
+	upload-pack protocol (engine for ssh and local
+	transport).
 
 gitlink:git-receive-pack[1]::
 	Invoked by 'git-send-pack' to receive what is pushed to it.
@@ -205,10 +214,11 @@ gitlink:git-shell[1]::
 	Restricted shell for GIT-only SSH access.
 
 gitlink:git-ssh-fetch[1]::
-	Pulls from a remote repository over ssh connection
+	Pulls from a remote repository over ssh connection by
+	walking commit chain.
 
 gitlink:git-ssh-upload[1]::
-	Helper "server-side" program used by git-ssh-fetch
+	Helper "server-side" program used by git-ssh-fetch.
 
 gitlink:git-update-server-info[1]::
 	Updates auxiliary information on a dumb server to help
@@ -223,16 +233,16 @@ Porcelain-ish Commands
 ----------------------
 
 gitlink:git-add[1]::
-	Add paths to the index file.
+	Add paths to the index.
 
 gitlink:git-am[1]::
 	Apply patches from a mailbox, but cooler.
 
 gitlink:git-applymbox[1]::
-	Apply patches from a mailbox.
+	Apply patches from a mailbox, original version by Linus.
 
 gitlink:git-bisect[1]::
-	Find the change that introduced a bug.
+	Find the change that introduced a bug by binary search.
 
 gitlink:git-branch[1]::
 	Create and Show branches.
@@ -259,7 +269,7 @@ gitlink:git-format-patch[1]::
 	Prepare patches for e-mail submission.
 
 gitlink:git-grep[1]::
-	Print lines matching a pattern
+	Print lines matching a pattern.
 
 gitlink:git-log[1]::
 	Shows commit logs.
@@ -283,7 +293,7 @@ gitlink:git-push[1]::
 	Update remote refs along with associated objects.
 
 gitlink:git-rebase[1]::
-	Rebase local commits to new upstream head.
+	Rebase local commits to the updated upstream head.
 
 gitlink:git-repack[1]::
 	Pack unpacked objects in a repository.
@@ -324,7 +334,7 @@ gitlink:git-archimport[1]::
 	Import an arch repository into git.
 
 gitlink:git-convert-objects[1]::
-	Converts old-style git repository
+	Converts old-style git repository.
 
 gitlink:git-cvsimport[1]::
 	Salvage your data out of another SCM people love to hate.
@@ -333,10 +343,10 @@ gitlink:git-lost-found[1]::
 	Recover lost refs that luckily have not yet been pruned.
 
 gitlink:git-merge-one-file[1]::
-	The standard helper program to use with "git-merge-index"
+	The standard helper program to use with `git-merge-index`.
 
 gitlink:git-prune[1]::
-	Prunes all unreachable objects from the object database
+	Prunes all unreachable objects from the object database.
 
 gitlink:git-relink[1]::
 	Hardlink common objects in local repositories.
@@ -348,10 +358,10 @@ gitlink:git-sh-setup[1]::
 	Common git shell script setup code.
 
 gitlink:git-symbolic-ref[1]::
-	Read and modify symbolic refs
+	Read and modify symbolic refs.
 
 gitlink:git-tag[1]::
-	An example script to create a tag object signed with GPG
+	An example script to create a tag object signed with GPG.
 
 gitlink:git-update-ref[1]::
 	Update the object name stored in a ref safely.
@@ -375,16 +385,19 @@ gitlink:git-get-tar-commit-id[1]::
 	Extract commit ID from an archive created using git-tar-tree.
 
 gitlink:git-mailinfo[1]::
-	Extracts patch from a single e-mail message.
+	Extracts patch and authorship information from a single
+	e-mail message, optionally transliterating the commit
+	message into utf-8.
 
 gitlink:git-mailsplit[1]::
-	git-mailsplit.
+	A stupid program to split UNIX mbox format mailbox into
+	individual pieces of e-mail.
 
 gitlink:git-patch-id[1]::
 	Compute unique ID for a patch.
 
 gitlink:git-parse-remote[1]::
-	Routines to help parsing $GIT_DIR/remotes/
+	Routines to help parsing `$GIT_DIR/remotes/` files.
 
 gitlink:git-request-pull[1]::
 	git-request-pull.
@@ -406,22 +419,20 @@ Commands not yet documented
 ---------------------------
 
 gitlink:gitk[1]::
-	gitk.
+	The gitk repository browser.
 
 
 Configuration Mechanism
 -----------------------
 
-Starting from 0.99.9 (actually mid 0.99.8.GIT), .git/config file
+Starting from 0.99.9 (actually mid 0.99.8.GIT), `.git/config` file
 is used to hold per-repository configuration options.  It is a
 simple text file modelled after `.ini` format familiar to some
 people.  Here is an example:
 
 ------------
 #
-# This is the config file, and
-# a '#' or ';' character indicates
-# a comment
+# A '#' or ';' character indicates a comment.
 #
 
 ; core variables
@@ -443,30 +454,30 @@ their operation accordingly.
 Identifier Terminology
 ----------------------
 <object>::
-	Indicates the sha1 identifier for any type of object
+	Indicates the object name for any type of object.
 
 <blob>::
-	Indicates a blob object sha1 identifier
+	Indicates a blob object name.
 
 <tree>::
-	Indicates a tree object sha1 identifier
+	Indicates a tree object name.
 
 <commit>::
-	Indicates a commit object sha1 identifier
+	Indicates a commit object name.
 
 <tree-ish>::
-	Indicates a tree, commit or tag object sha1 identifier.  A
+	Indicates a tree, commit or tag object name.  A
 	command that takes a <tree-ish> argument ultimately wants to
 	operate on a <tree> object but automatically dereferences
 	<commit> and <tag> objects that point at a <tree>.
 
 <type>::
 	Indicates that an object type is required.
-	Currently one of: blob/tree/commit/tag
+	Currently one of: `blob`, `tree`, `commit`, or `tag`.
 
 <file>::
-	Indicates a filename - always relative to the root of
-	the tree structure GIT_INDEX_FILE describes.
+	Indicates a filename - almost always relative to the
+	root of the tree structure `GIT_INDEX_FILE` describes.
 
 Symbolic Identifiers
 --------------------
@@ -474,17 +485,20 @@ Any git command accepting any <object> can also use the following
 symbolic notation:
 
 HEAD::
-	indicates the head of the repository (ie the contents of
-	`$GIT_DIR/HEAD`)
+	indicates the head of the current branch (i.e. the
+	contents of `$GIT_DIR/HEAD`).
+
 <tag>::
-	a valid tag 'name'+
-	(ie the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/tags/<tag>`)
+	a valid tag 'name'
+	(i.e. the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/tags/<tag>`).
+
 <head>::
-	a valid head 'name'+
-	(ie the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/heads/<head>`)
+	a valid head 'name'
+	(i.e. the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/heads/<head>`).
+
 <snap>::
-	a valid snapshot 'name'+
-	(ie the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/snap/<snap>`)
+	a valid snapshot 'name'
+	(i.e. the contents of `$GIT_DIR/refs/snap/<snap>`).
 
 
 File/Directory Structure
@@ -493,7 +507,7 @@ File/Directory Structure
 Please see link:repository-layout.html[repository layout] document.
 
 Higher level SCMs may provide and manage additional information in the
-GIT_DIR.
+`$GIT_DIR`.
 
 
 Terminology
@@ -509,7 +523,7 @@ The git Repository
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 These environment variables apply to 'all' core git commands. Nb: it
 is worth noting that they may be used/overridden by SCMS sitting above
-git so take care if using Cogito etc
+git so take care if using Cogito etc.
 
 'GIT_INDEX_FILE'::
 	This environment allows the specification of an alternate
@@ -530,9 +544,9 @@ git so take care if using Cogito etc
 	written to these directories.
 
 'GIT_DIR'::
-	If the 'GIT_DIR' environment variable is set then it specifies
-	a path to use instead of `./.git` for the base of the
-	repository.
+	If the 'GIT_DIR' environment variable is set then it
+	specifies a path to use instead of the default `.git`
+	for the base of the repository.
 
 git Commits
 ~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -559,7 +573,7 @@ include::../README[]
 Authors
 -------
 	git's founding father is Linus Torvalds <torvalds@osdl.org>.
-	The current git nurse is Junio C. Hamano <junkio@cox.net>.
+	The current git nurse is Junio C Hamano <junkio@cox.net>.
 	The git potty was written by Andres Ericsson <ae@op5.se>.
 	General upbringing is handled by the git-list <git@vger.kernel.org>.